It isn't horrible.
However the animation is lacking in multiple ways. Firstly, there hardly is any. It would have been nice to see more animated Civilians. In addition, the text was too small and moved too quickly off the screen. Next time, make less text too read (it's an animation, not a booklet), or at least add a button to click on when you are done reading the text. In addition, for a flash this long, the file size is ridiculous. Try compressing the flash more.